Etijah -Upper Intermediate Stage

Write an essay on the topic: Which is more important in the workplace, emotional intelligence or intellectual intelligence?

Instructions:
1. Follow the writing steps outlined in your book on page 60 to structure your essay.
2. Your uploaded writing must include all of the following:
• Brainstorm (your ideas before writing).
• First draft (your initial version).
• Feedback from another group (after exchanging essays).
• Final rewritten version (after applying feedback).
• A short note explaining the feedback you received and the changes you made